Hallo zusammen,

ein Kollege hat mir ein Einladungsschreiben in englisch gegeben und mich gebeten, es zu korrigieren. Das habe ich jetzt auch so in etwa gemacht, aber mit einigen Formulierungen bin ich noch nicht ganz zufreiden, deshalb würde es mich interessieren, ob Ihr noch Verbesserungsvorschläge habt?

Dear Colleagues,

following the memorable Intersite Football Tournament in Basel in June 2002, it is a great pleasure for us to invite you to the


Roche Intersite Football Tournament 2003
27-29 June 2003
Mannheim, Germany


In order to faciliate the organization we would be delighted if you could send us as soon as possible (see attachment 1: Preliminary Registration) a first statement of interest.

The deadline for the final registration, which includes the list of the intended participants, is March 01, 2003 (see attachment 2: Definite Registration).

12 Teams can take part and will be selected according to the date of the completed registration. Each team should consist of at least 11 players.

A website containing detailed information will be created next month. When the page is set up you will be informed via e-mail. The web page will be updated continually.

We are looking forward to meeting you in Mannheim next year !

General Proceedings

The arrival of the teams is planned for Friday, June 27. If you wish we will arrange for pick up either at Frankfurter Airport or Mannheim Train Station.

You will spend the night at Dorint Hotel in Mannheim (Germany). The rate for a double room is about 95 Euro per night, the rate for breakfast is 16 € per person.

On Friday evening we would like to invite you to a come-together-party into the Eichbaum brewery a nice and famous restaurant in a brewery in Mannheim.
The matches will take place on Saturday, June 28 in the stadium of the Football Club ASV Feudenheim. Mannheim-Feudenheim is located about 2 miles south-east from the Roche site. On Saturday evening, you are invited to the player party at a restaurant in a ship that cruises the rivers Rhine and Neckar. There also the victor distinction award ceremony will take place.

On Sunday, June 29 you will have the opportunity to spend some time in the interesting cities of Mannheim or Heidelberg which is located in the heart of Baden Würtenberg/Germany. Of course, we will provide detailed information on interesting places to visit.

As per your request we will plan a sightseeing Tour for you on Sunday at any place in the region of Mannheim and bring you to the airport or train station.

We are sure you will have a great time in Mannheim